Diamond_Emerald_8251

Great plot, interesting characters, and dark but intriguing twists. It needs editing or beta reader to fix the real world chaotic writing in the beginning and wrong word usage: mourn/ moan, sign/ sigh, grin/grind, warp/ wrap, angle/ angel. The last 4 paragraphs of the previous chapter are inserted in the beginning of the next chapter; I find it annoying.Overall: I recommend this book, but user be aware of the slight issues that can be a mental stumbling block

Lol. I meant before, like how is Max connected to Nora since he made it seem like they talked about her ex. Or did he just overhear stuff at the diner/ campus and truly lives in his own fantasy. I was trying to figure out if he was a character I missed/ skipped overBut thank you for your reply and sorry for the misunderstanding

I think my reading retention has diminished, who are Alex and Max?

So far, I love it and cannot hardly wait to see how it all unfolds.