Author_for_fun

That may be true but I doubt she'd confess to him so quickly. That's where cringy and unrealistic aspect that annoys people comes from.

He doesn't deserve the kudos. He doesn't put any effort in at all or this would actually be somewhat readable.

Yeah that's exactly how. TBF to him he has no experience with girls apart from his sister's.

I died a little inside reading that ish

Who are you to scold others when you've only read a few. Most of us have read way more than a few, and when you do, it's very easy to pick up the cliched Chinese lines. Firstly, this guy is straight up putting this shit in chat gtp and not even bothering to remove the cliched nonsense. Honestly, the least he could do considering he's barely putting in any effort considering he's probably trying to make money off of this.

didn't this guy kill an iron born in combat? So how the fuck did she manage to rpe him. feels so forced though a lot of things feel forced in this FF

I mean, they ask for it because of the way you write. Honestly, Elia doesn't deserve to be toyed with the way you have she's one of the saddest characters in the book. Forced to marry someone who probably didn't love her, then set aside, raped and killed. I wouldn't care if you played with the more arrogant noble ladies like Cersei, Catelyn etc bit Elia deserves better.

the only reason I find reveals like this stupid is because who in their right mind would believe it. Honestly, if my friend came to me and said "hey I'm an 80 year old women reincarnated into a young boys body." I'd send them to the asylum.

Having blacks and greens really is stupid. No offense, but 1 no one would support Rhaenrya over Baelon and 2, neither would they support the queen over Baelon apart from maybe the Hightowers, especially with him having many achievements under his belt it would be foolish to think he can be usurped.

He didn't say anything wrong. Most people rule with emotion that's true, but the difference is that men can push their emotions aside and make decisions based on logic. Women more often than not can not do that.