Troll_of_the_Hole

it was an ok chapter interesting concept don't know if I like it but still good story

Nice thanks fot the chapter

thanks again

yosh another good chapter thanks

actually thought I was on a diffrent story when I did the stars woops

oosh nice chapter once again. really enjoying this revamp.

Bloody brilliant. Love it keep up the good work.

This is a great story and the fact that its getting a revamp is so great I'm long forward to seeing where this story goes in the future 10 outa 10 you should read this story.

This has taken me for a spin down memory lane and I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes.

noice thanks for the chapter