Celstia

Since its only 7 chapters there isn't much of the world building although it's a unique and refreshing storyline that you got i especially liked how you describe your creatures its well detailed and vivid im looking forward to what your gonna do to the story

Wow man you did good explaining things but don't describe it to much it is good to leave the readers in the dark sometimes so they can unlock another chapter but even with that i like every ounce of it