I like the character's personalities because they jump right out of the story which is good in view. I like how the character interacts with the other characters. good work Author
The ending of the synopsis motivated me to read more! Good grammar, formatting, and descriptions as well, look forward to what happens next- I like how the main character jinxed himself
Love the story but needs to have more emotions in the characters as they interact with each other. The world-building is so good keep up the good work. Never give up
I love the story very much and it drew me in without realizing it. Funny to see the character using it in front of his father and he just took it with grace for his father.
I love Love the story usually I get emotional as I read the stories but this story drew me in immediately with the background, world-building, and the character's interactions with one another.
this story is not my style of story I will enjoy but I love how you put the characters interact with each other. The world-building is quite interesting. Keep up the good work
I like how Auther was able to get another chance of awakening and it is sad how he has not one parent that got his side. Keep you the good work and don't give up
I usually get lost on reading, which I did and I want to see more of the characters personally. Keep up the good work and don't give up no matter what happens
I love your story and I am wondering where it rest of the sentences are because I get lost in the stories, but yours I did get lost but came back into realty to quick. I think add more sentence which just make it longer. The plots and characters are awesome and keep up the good work
Keep up the good work I love how Daniel was charmed for the cute foxy not to hurt and it was the goddess of luck fragment. :) Love the story plot so much