OEMIX

Firstly, I am against changing anything in the old chapters.Secondly, the revival needs to be removed and it is not necessary to change the old chapters, you can just come up with a situation where the cheat will stop working . Thirdly, this is the development of relationships, and here I am with both hands for Ino, I won’t explain why because everyone has different tastes! In general, there may be another girl, but please not Hinata, she is of course sweet, beautiful, caring, etc. but it’s boring and not interesting! I don’t know English, so I use a translator, so forgive me if something is not clear, I hope he correctly conveys the essence of my thoughts

Not on the battlefield? Are you kidding? These clans, thanks to traditions and alliance, survived the bloody times when there were no villages and everyone just killed each other

The main thing is that you finish this fanfic, and everything else is not important.

Is he seriously going to go after one of the Swordsmen of the Mist?Won’t there be problems with the kiri later, after all, this is a relic from a village that could start a war, it’s not for nothing that other villages still haven’t taken this sword(I'm sure that if another village wanted to take the sword, they would be able to do so). In short, this is all illogical and stupid, the author just gives loot

I hope the trio Ino-Sika-Cho does not change, otherwise it will be stupid . A trio is not just a familiar composition, it is a tradition of clans and confirmation of friendship between clans when the heads of clans are on the same team

It was a bad idea with rebirth, and I liked the previous version of the plot better

The fanfiction is very cool and interesting, I hope in the future the author will not abandon it and will be able to finish it. I'm looking forward to new chapters (I'm writing this through a translator, so I hope my thoughts are clear (⁠*⁠´⁠ω⁠｀⁠*⁠) )

I can't read it anymore, the hero is just a piece without character, the idea of ​​the fanfic is not bad, but the implementation is just terrible.