TheDeath_Angel

*translator...

This seems to be a dumb mistake by the author... A few sentences later he is referring to the talents and calls them metamorphagus and prophecy. He also has a weirdly written sentence in which he refers to the mc as 'being a silent'. From the context of the next few paragraphs I infer he probably meant an obscurial and obscurus here. These kinds of mistakes give me a bad translation vibe, I honestly don't know how it got such high praises if thats the level of the first chapter

U should probably change the spelling to Ashe... they may seem the same but the meaning is very different.

a lot of mistakes when it comes to the time line. The house burnt down 6 years before the first episode. Derek is 22 when the show starts, making mc 5-6 years younger than Derek, not 3.

No time element?

PS... Please forget that I used in fact and it's a fact in the same sentence...XD.

Plot armour doesn't keep the hero from suffering, or even keeps him alive at the end. It doesn't even really protect the hero per say... Say a hero that dies at the end of the book. He is still "protected" by the invisible shield that is plot armour until he unravels the whole plot he was meant to discover. Plot armour just keeps the hero from dying before ending the story. When people complain about plot armour, what they really complain about is just how unreasonable the specific armour is, not it's existence. It's a fact, the plot in itself is in fact plot armour. A form of "destiny" created by the writer which keeps the story intact, even when the unreasonable, unprobable and impossible happen.

Honestly, the most boring direction to go in...

Not really, considering that he is only gonna use the password when returning to his room, not leaving it...