pretty good not bad . are you going to change send abilities the star tree thing you know what I mean . Some are pretty damn useless

Does mine mean like an overlord is pretty cool it's sad that the whole group didn't come I really want to see the world of the rising shield hero I want to have that will work out she was in it

way too short believe you could shut this in the other chapter

I don't know I feel like it's pretty good. I feel like you're missing some details slow down in some areas there and there like what happened to Gail's son did he die I feel like something's Irish.I do like extra details of slime diary I should not be a question I should be scattered in all in the chapters you know a few people opinions there anymore . will building to understand how people feel and the characters think. what's going on in the world we have the progress is in the town in the world

hell yeah this has so much potential but good at chapter 70 I got real bad but still is still pretty good . at the end it could have much been better hope you rewrite again on the account

The homelander will just kill him on the spot until then tell the public to take over the company and victory.

I see all potential in the story pretty well Keep it up

pretty good not bad at all I hope more comes out soon

just do it a harem don't make it big like 3 or 5 or 7 .

yes

It's a pretty good novel I wish you had more detail on the fighting scenes and on the world situation everything else is pretty good

pretty good wishes it more chapters coming out that's the only negative part

pretty pretty good my only complaint is not enough chapters

pretty good like it balances not just using games logic it is realistic I hope you make more

dude that was short anything else come on

I think I have one problem: I think the Minecraft system should be a little more realistic but be more realism as infant water or infant lava too much it be kind of silly just had some limits like he can craft some things you just have to get the resources can't be overpowered

pretty good not bad .Vikings culture is not good but no different from the rest of the world everyone raid does it

I like the size stories pov of other people side how they get pissed or some people get help like these little details little chapters has more volume in the wild world actions they do

he becomes a simp wow .I like how MC wanted to leave freya familiar Now follow her .Do I be confused about the MC his emotions

pretty good hope more comes out earlier.