Mahenzz

*just watched the woman clad in onyx armor*

This title makes ot seem like he is a heroine addict. Lucan really went off the deep end hih?

Go slow! Progress is interesting! Challenge is interesting! OP protaganists are interesting but only when written well, in certain circumstances, or as comedy! Tension is the true life blood of writing, what makes reading so captivating.

Decent. Weird turn with him suddenly going kinda psycho but ig it might be cursed energy messing with him. Is kinda cringe edge though. Set in Marvel which is a decent enough world so can't really take points from that. Writing is decent, no glaring flaws, author just has a real bad case of repition. Honestly kinda reminds me of AI writing where they say the same thing 2 or 3 times in different ways. This paired with the MC constantly being introspective made it kinda annoying.

This is the most demiurge thing I've ever seen.

A good one.

The premise is a guy playing a game that is actually controlling an avatar in the worm universe. It's a guy controlling a female avatar.

Uh, I review bc I want more chapters. Good writing quality, unqiue premise, and I like the general confusion of every around the mc. I do feel bad for the "npcs" though.

Chat will always make the worst decisions.

The classic fall damage check.