Genesis13

I could drag on the debate and so on. it's js pointless. and arguing with someone is useless who steals smth but denies it saying that it's from a site. how stupid would it be if i used an official art of a fiction for my novel and use it to generate revenue? it's unethical. ppl like that aren't worth arguing against. I hope that clears u doubts.

alright

sir! aye aye sir! shall follow u till the depths of hell sir! lolol felt like role-playing. the scenes were detailed enough NGL. u r a man of culture

honest review here. the idea is good, the characters are good, the world development is good, the system is good, the power balance is good. but the writing style isn't. it really ISN'T. I wouldn't call it poor or bad, but rather it's more of a choice. theres'stoo much info dump with too little dialogue between the Paras which is a rookie mistake and it kills the reader base. trust me, you would've at least 1.5x the time of curent reader base if not for this problem. now going deeper into the problem of writing style, u might be thinking that doing an explanation or info dump was really necessary and it was crucial at that particular point but trust me, u using 1st person narrative to make it sound like a narrative didn't work. 1st person narrative's power is shown best when u do a narration in present tense (more like the 'i powered up and kicked the dragon's ass'.) anyways, there are ways u can let the ppl know abt the world without doing boring character dumps. just refer to some popular guides since they tell you the 'how' and not just 'what'. and yeah the para rule too. too many lines in a single para. it's not suitable for readers on webnovel. it kills their interest and already short attention span so keep that in mind. that's all from my side. if u think i am going out of my way and talking shit abt ur story, don't mind my words. just keep doing what u do best. anyways thanks for the free chaps. cya around.

defying the numbers. wish exams would be like that.

sus as hell right? :o he's a 'Hell' right.

he didn't forget bruh. in games, items are genrerally shown glowing automatically as the mission gets triggered. but all the dialogues are forgotten or skipped. u can think if it as he remembered the background dialogue being played during the gameplay. no inconsistencies. hence proved

I finally realised what's wrong with this novel. it's the basic language structure which is archaic. it's similar to those short stories from the 18th and 19th century which were written by de maupasaant and others of the time (I don't remember when he was alive btw, now don't nahgme abt thayt). and it so happens that ppl these days... don't read things like that. unless they really need to. although the novel has 650+ chapters now, if u the author r seeing this comment I would suggest you to simplify your language structure. readers would love me, i give my word. I know it cause, I did the same shit with my fic, and couldn't handle the aftermath.

the start was really difficult to get. by the end, i could get it more or less