Bmarsh8545

I’m into the paid chapters and it’s not adequately paced at all I can promise you, there’s not enough progression to justify buying chapters anymore especially when the ending portion of most chapters is just a repeat of the characters status info

Enjoyed it except for the sudden ending, it had more potential to be used.

The reincarnation of Pablo Escobar had me dying laughing 😂🤣

The huge amount of mistakes since chapter one as if the author doesn’t know what the word proofread means, added to the amount of free chapters/price of chapters after is a slap in the face.

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Perfect OP protagonist in my opinion, desperately asking author for more/faster chapters.

The constant grammar mistakes and poor writing quality that almost creates a stutter effect when reading has me wondering why the author didn’t proofread one bit before publishing, try again.

A masterpiece of a story, I’m completely hooked.

Needs proofreading and editing for multiple sections.

If you can’t introduce characters while progressing the plot you need to work on your skills. And for the plot to not move in 9 chapters is a failure, if someone gets to the locked chapters portion of a novel and unlocks 10 chapters at a time only to find out nothing has changed they’ll instantly drop your book lol