Allen_Vinkaldr

Honestly the novel was a pretty decent read especially so at the beginning however as the story progresses ( I personally only read to 354) characters seem to slowly be forgotten by the author. Erin's Phoenix has no growth and the little fairy he has seems loses it's importance when it was supposed to be a great help later in the story. This may be from only reading to chapter 354 but despite this the novel seems great. I would still recommend others to read it but this is where i end for the story is not right for me.

does bro not realize if he was mc then he would be fked cuz the currents MC's fiance would the games mc

did this get dropped? Is a great novel btw

absolutely great novel yes it uses qs way to mutch in the first few chapters seriously every 1 or 2 words sometimes its just repetitive but a great novel anyways

Neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed more chapters more updates

seriously I checked and as is used every 3-2 sentences

you use the word as way to mutch. In the first 2 minutes of reading I read as more than a hundred times use some different language than as please

A shamless author for sure. Warning this novel is purely for my enjoyment may be droped if I get sick of it. Do not in any case expect regular chapter releases. Extra warning - I will add whatever I desire so do not expect anything from me. If dissatisfied with the plot then don't read after all you decided to read this. 2nd Extra warning Don't expect me to read your comments and I will most likely change past chapters if I think it doesn't work with my story and certain characters will dispear from past future and present of novel if I don't like them or just change personality literally whatever I decided at that point. People who desire romance MC is a bit twisted mentally and physically.

overall q decent novel however their is something annoying me the tag says r18 however I've read to chapter 109 and their is not 1 r18 chapter.

Absolutely amazing novel. Have high hopes for the future of this novel and hope it continues for a long time.