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my mistake I was writing 'make MC moves on' not' mad mc moves on'.

Humm at this it would be better if you mad mc moves on and try to be with another woman? I don't mean making him to be with another one but if you make Mavis jealous she would do more rash things. Also is this a reverse Harem for Mavis?

It would be more interesting seeing him transmigration into DC when all the heroes started working. I can see that now nothing can stop him and even if batman comes back because he is in his first year MC will be able to deal with him so that is why I don't find this interesting but I could be wrong so I will continue reading. Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

Hi, I know of fanfic because I read your other fanfic,'with these hands'. First of all, I think you should at least reach 50 chapters on your other fanfic before you start another one because I enjoy that fanfic and two, i don't want you to be so busy but whatever it's your choice. Second, I have only read fanfic about RWBY and didn't even watched the series but I think I understand so well because of those fanfic. Third, this is just the first chapter so I can't say so many things and what is your general idea for this but what I know is that I don't like you throwing MC centuries, that means so many original characters and I don't like that. Honestly if he ever going to live till the plot start then what he would do? Go play student with the maine characters as OP immortal. I'm sure after hundreds of years he would lose interest in baby sitting ruby and others or mabey he is going to meet her mother? Is there even a romance? Also will his semblance be similar to redo healer? You know because they both can heal. Or maybe a regenerative healing factor so he could live for a long time? I don't know sentries before the plot sound boring but it's all my opinion and others may like it

Thanks for the chapter. This chapter was good, it's logical for batman to find him so soon seeing that he didn't hide his changes. The only bad part was where he said he knows that batman is Bruce Wayne. I'm sure everyone in Gotham at least one time thought that batman is Bruce Wayne but they soon realised they are wrong because batman made a plan to appear at the same time Bruce Wayne is in a party or something like that using technology or something else. MC doesn't know if batman had done that already in that world or not(or maybe he knows, I don't know). Bruce may just eb a supporter for batman so yeah that didn't seem logical of course I can be wrong and MC may have his own reason or maybe he will tell batman he knows him because of his abilities or maybe he have another plan. Also getting the help of batman and selling the cure for cancer is not a bad idea when he make it so he won't need to make it himself, also didn't Supergirl once sold the cure for cancer to batman? I hope you make batgirl already a thing and don't make her just starting to become batgirl. Also I don't like Artemis as female lead I hope you change it. Also it would be good if there was teen titans already.

look I understand, you have a life and you can always read and comment whenever you are free and don't worry i won't abandon the Scott pilgrim world, because it wasn't so clear in the show and comics, i will make things up myself but don't worry it won't be an anything stupid or overly complex or so simple. like always, thank you for your support.

Thanks for the chapter. You were able to make Wednesday interested in MC but how will you make MC interested in wednesday? MC will be attracted to her body? I don't know how you will do it I'm looking forward do it. Also what happened to Natasha? Did I said her name right? Also I can see Wednesday as a potential yandere, the type that will kill you seriously so I hope you don't change her personality just because or just make her be a kitty.

See, there is only two comment.

I only see two comment. the first is this comment that I'm replying and the second is that you wrote" also love to learn more about the world building of this world and how it works" if there is another comment then i didn't see it. you could take a screenshot again and send it in this reply, the last time i was able to read it. also maybe because your comment is to long so it doesn't show or maybe because its the first comment I don't know.