will be releasing somewhere today, currently writing a chapter.

please give chapter

yep, i can run for like 3-4 maybe 5 minutes straight now

Of course, gold bless you to bro. IMMENSELY at that lol.

i forgot all about that lol

It's like having a samurai with god-like sword skills but the samurai has no armor, due to his incredible sword skills he almost never gets hit but even when he does he is able to use footwork, sword skills and overall dexterity and ability to use body properly to only be nicked by the attack, if you give him some light armor, even though the armor is incredibly light and barley helps it still does help, albeit not very much.

This dude can't spell for the life of him so I will translate it for y'all: "Our MC only cares for what he wants to care for, or what concerns him, such as becoming powerful so that nothing can hurt him and his loved ones, which is his goal in his life. To become strong he needs nutrition and nutrition comes from food, thus why should he give his food to others and keep himself from achieving his goal? He's not a goody two shoes or a bad person, he simply is HIM"

weaving through the car interior sounds weird, you could use spread through or sum else

What makes us any different from animals? we are simply smarter animals, we are not gods or anything special, we are just born with different talents, the fact that you see us humans as above everything else is incredibly egotistical. Also, the fact that you believe that anyone should live a life of pain and suffering rather than experience tranquility is genuinely incredible.

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bc of how much we fear death everyone thinks death is the worst thing ever, but it's not. In reality, death is the single most tranquil and enjoyable thing ever, the only bad thing about death is that to kill someone you must damage them until their life is extinguished which usually is excruciatingly painful. However, abortion isn't painful as, BABIES, don't unlock [conciscnouss skill] until age level 4 so fetuses will not feel it at all. So what you are saying is that you would rather have a helpless baby suffer than let said baby experience the greatest form of tranquility and happiness. Also I'm not suicidal and yes I know I sound like I am, and to the people who are, know even if no one else loves you, I do.

Nope it was a great terror that sunny fought as a saint

I get you, idk about you but for me the thought of re-writing or editing a chapter genuinely hurts my brain, so I can see how difficult it is to re-write a chapter.

The almighty Insomniac one!

Ninjago sunny

The insomniac one, Sleepless, leader of the DawnBreak.

"only one thing is clear.....only you are truly free to make your own fate." ---> "only one thing is clear... only you are truly free to make your own fate." More than 3 dots in an ellipsis is improper grammar and can tick off readers and even cause them to drop the book, there should also be a space after the ellipsis as a lack of space is also improper grammar. Hope the constructive criticism is helpful!

Everyone yapping about, "B-b-but It's an Undead!" or "W-w-what if it's just weak!" y'all, to put it bluntly, are dumb. Explain to me how a creature of higher rank and core can be so easily slaughtered by a human, and mind you, humans are already weak compared to beasts and nightmare creatures, that is not even dormant or seems to have a powerful weapon.

Man steal ovary*