Yalatola
To write a great story we need to live them
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Yalatola6hตอบกลับถึง TerromThe best decision would have been to follow Thomas' plan, but you've resumed the only problem: this Sin a child in mind and was formatted by the others, so they ended regretting when confronted with the facts. The plan would have worked if they could have been monsters till the end.
"It's over, he's gone."- Yalatola6hตอบกลับถึง Terrom
answer: yes
"Really? So we'll finally see Dora? We'll see him, right mom??" The woman's tired eyes smiled at her as she embraced her. - Yalatola9hตอบกลับถึง Terrom
I give you a big warning: the following 14 chapters will make your blood boil, but trust me, everything that will happen is the base of a great final arc. I'm here in case you need more information, even spoilers if you can't take it anymore.
"Really? So we'll finally see Dora? We'll see him, right mom??" The woman's tired eyes smiled at her as she embraced her. - Yalatola20hตอบกลับถึง TerromCh 138 Honor Or Foolishness?
- Yalatola22hตอบกลับถึง TerromCh 138 Honor Or Foolishness?
- Yalatola4dตอบกลับถึง Terrom
The true Dora, you'll understand in future chapters (aka 120-184)
|Beta: 23% - Yalatola5dตอบกลับถึง TymSpiritwolf
yeah👍
But he was far from being weak, he just needed to be a twig at that moment to complete his freedom. - Yalatola5dตอบกลับถึง TymSpiritwolf
two people told me the mc wasn't op on discord, look the current trending, good books nowadays must have op mc beating everything from the beginning
But he was far from being weak, he just needed to be a twig at that moment to complete his freedom. - Yalatola5dตอบกลับถึง TymSpiritwolf
We never know what was on the plan of the author, I too am a reader so as a writer I know what I want and what I'm tired to see. I know where this story is going and I have no intention to write another cliche here to milk the story over thousand chapters.
But he was far from being weak, he just needed to be a twig at that moment to complete his freedom. - Yalatola5dตอบกลับถึง TymSpiritwolf
If you think it was good you should trust the author in what he's doing.
But he was far from being weak, he just needed to be a twig at that moment to complete his freedom. - Yalatola8dตอบกลับถึง William_Claw
I see
"You… Why did you join the Academy? There's no way someone like Lady Elizabeth would recommend you for no reason. Why are you so weak?" - Yalatola8dตอบกลับถึง William_Claw
I understand, I'll change that then, thanks
"Oh? she didn't say to thou? I be surprised, considering thou art her brother, Hope, yet 'tis true. A few years since, I got thy sister to join when she was merely E-rank, and today she is doing the like. Is not this a form of cycle? 'tis like I be receiving mine grandchildren, fufu" - Yalatola8dตอบกลับถึง William_Claw
don't know what is legion but ok
"You… Why did you join the Academy? There's no way someone like Lady Elizabeth would recommend you for no reason. Why are you so weak?" - Yalatola9dตอบกลับถึง CaredevilCh 20 A Body Of Their Own
- Yalatola17dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Dora 11 years old
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Yalatola21dตอบกลับถึง Trevor_Anderson_6429Ch 4 The Heroine and the Genius
- Yalatola22dตอบกลับถึง Trevor_Anderson_6429
many things happens in the shadow
"You shouldn't underestimate the abnormal nature of a true Avatar." - Yalatola22dตอบกลับถึง Trevor_Anderson_6429Ch 4 The Heroine and the Genius
- Yalatola25dตอบกลับถึง DaoistOfSupremacy
The characters know each other already so they don't need to explain everything but i admit that it was a bad idea for readers. I suggest you check the technical sheets, most of the world building is there for new readers and I can answer if you have more questions
"... I'll tell Mr. Albert that you keep calling him my mother." - Yalatola26dตอบกลับถึง Chaos_lord_
The rest is too long to detail and probably pointless now, but I'll follow directly with the second phase in a few days, hopefully 10 chapters before Monday. The new book will show you more what I tried to do here and the lore, and it will correct the mistakes I made before in many ways. hope to see you there too and make something that you will appreciate