GTHarris08

Tough luck ...

Finally, a protagonist who gets rid of his system for a something better!!!

I originally thought this would be another trashy xianxia novel wannabe, but you have actually managed to create a very unique work. The mc and characters are all okay, the sāi energy instead of the generic qi is very original and the power system goes hard. Looking forward to seeing more chapters!

**suddenly drops dead due to peak fiction**

who says he's gonna become the strongest? most dangerous, yeah. but there'll always be someone who would effortlessly be able to kick his ass ten times over without breaking a sweat.

Ok, I'll give it to you, you have one of the best first chapters I have read. the story is dynamic and has a natural flow, and the mc is relatable and enjoyable to read about. I really like your writing style and the plot is definitely worth reading. I look forward to more chapters soon! keep up the good work.

nope🤭🤭

dont worry, the chapters will gradually get longer and longer

Great job! You finally wrote something actually worth reading! Tai is a well crafted 3D character whose plight is very understandable. The world background is lacking a bit though, but let's just say that it's because the work is still in it's starting chapters. I look forward to seeing more and more chapters!🤞🤞

Ok.. The first two chapters are kinda dark.. But the writing style is impeccable and the story flows really well. hope to see how Alex escapes tho