Jhon_4525

WAIT, you are telling me that after defeating a large number of people even with his hands tied he was defeated by a horse rapist, ONE ONLY, who was that imbeciles the rapist and savage version of Arthur Dayne or the reincarnation of Azor Azai

Boring, rough and very lukewarm characters and a protagonist who has nothing special and much less his dragon [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]

That Mc so cowardly allows Daemon to insult both his mother and him and best of all chapters ago he has the nerve to call a cowardly king 🫵😂

Aburrido [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=Unalived][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=angry][img=angry][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=sad][img=sad]

Nowhere in the manga or anime does it say, the only thing that shortens Luffy's life were the hormones that were applied to him in Marineford, the devil fruit that embedded in his DNA would not hurt him by using it

He has the ability and that is not trained a devil fruit is pure power that is limited only to the imagination

It's a very frustrating fanfiction to read, it's a very weak protagonist still having such a powerful Devil Fruit [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]

Doesn't this guy have a Devil Fruit? Why is he so weak it seems that the author does not know how the devil fruits work, he is so ignorant that in the previous chapter he made his own fruit hurt him and that is impossible

Boring plot and it's as if the Mc practically didn't exist, there are no changes in the plot that an individual of that category would cause [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]