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Jessika_vocals

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Hey! Welcome to be a part of my inspiration. ❤️ I'm Jessica_Vocals. A young girl who's chasing her dreams to be heard by the world through writing. 🦋 I belive we can do this together, my loves! 😘 🤗

2023-05-12 เข้าร่วมแล้วCyprus
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การเขียน

4.5h

ของการอ่าน

43

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4
โมเมนต์
9
  • Jessika_vocals
    Jessika_vocalsa year ago
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    Heyyy, Author!! Take all my powers tones, I mean, take everything! This story is a ballistic one, right from the cover and its title. OMG! I was awed. So, I decided to give a read. Interestingly, the characters and grammatical syntax are superseded my expectations. A take from me: Flesh out the MC, Ebuka's action and descriptions around him using the : "show don't tell" device. The elaboration on certain words, should be moderate, but then, talk more about actions! Not showing us. Asides this, it's a five stars from me! Keep writing, dear Author.

  • Jessika_vocals
    Jessika_vocalsa year ago
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    Ouu! What powers is that? Will I get them too? [img=thinking]

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  • Jessika_vocals
    Jessika_vocalsa year ago
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    Hmm. Interesting![img=nervous]

  • Jessika_vocals
    Jessika_vocalsa year ago
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    I'm giving this book a 5 stars, because it is worth it! Damn! This is a beautiful masterpiece that caught my attention, ranging from its concise description, to its captivating dialogue! 🙌 Well done , Author!👌

  • Jessika_vocals
    Jessika_vocalsa year ago
    ตอบกลับถึง Ninestar619_5803

    Ouu, thank you for your heart-warming review! Please, keep tune for more updates. Loves>>kisses .

  • Jessika_vocals
    Jessika_vocalsa year ago
    ตอบกลับถึง Manda_Chisom

    Ow, thank you so much for the cheers. Yes, I wouldn't drop the book, yet - although, my fan base isn't amassed much readers. I understand I'm just starting out, and your review is a driving point for me. Thank you. I won't dare give up now. 🙃

  • Jessika_vocals
    Jessika_vocalsa year ago
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    It's my first time! I need your reviews to set as a map if I'm improving or vise-versa. How is the exposition between The MC and other round characters? Who is your favourite character? What story twists makes you wanna scream and develop cold feet?? 😂 And MOST IMPORTANTLY , in what ways do you suggest I improve?

  • Jessika_vocals
    Jessika_vocalsa year ago
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    OMG! 🙄 She's giving her book a 5 stars! This Author is so ridiculous! A Five stars? She's really high and needs to be sued! Yes! This is what I get when I decided to chase passion. Interestingly, "A Bride for The Vampires" is my First ever Novel, dedicated on Webnovel. Writing this wonderful masterpiece and putting in the sweat and toils, is a BIG WIN for me, and also to others : that you CAN do anything you SET your mind to! Now, wonderful readers, I need your views concerning this story.

  • Jessika_vocals
    Jessika_vocalsa year ago
    ตอบกลับถึง Elon_Smith

    Ow, you don't understand how this review made me feel! Keep reading, as I update and add to library! <kisses>>hugs!