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clearly a copy from a mtl i read just changed the names

really bad, and just 17 free chap? with how it s written can t you skip to the moment kids are born atcleast? so boring

i tried the cheat is not that op, lot of time skips. story not interesting maybe good for married couples who wants some fantasy but really bad. it doesn't feel enticing. at least personnaly

really hate this guy so annoying way of talking and the system is useless really don t get it

the mc is just a tool for his sister xDD

good work ! that would be good to know about the different force, where he lives ( capital or low end city) how useful can items be in the world. the lvl of the highest group. and something i don't understand like can others only take off the fruit from the game ? or make specifications of what else they can take off. it feels blurry to me. Also will he be a lone player or get into a guild etc. Anyway good read wish to see more

nice start

are yousure it s translated ? xD can t find it

i hate people ranting on and on undecided trash mc so fuking annoying ! XD and this guy landon so fuking annoying do people really talk like that xD fuck me at 4 am reading just fuck my mind. 20 at least so he could his basic abilities and result 0 extravagance no cheat at all. so sad i put 5 stars because writing it might be hard using your imaginations with one guy lazy and another guys annoying well everyone got their own imaginations. i pity you i don't know what life you ve lived. might have been hard.

i wish you could write another story it s really good, so tired of trash novels please make one more xD