good work

Kind of sad when trash is called good

Good story, man I didn't find any grammer or typo errors, they story is easy to understand and is also well written, Please make more chapter. Keep up your work dude

I can say, the story is good, but what people need to more chapter, more chapter means more understanding of your story.

what kind of business man?

No touching? 🥺

So for I can say it's good. The character building is nice, author did a good job for making it sound better, also there is only 18 chapters.