BrokenClock

Review as of chapter 58. The writing style is smooth and mostly without mistakes. If there are mistake that occur there are few and little. There isn't much to say about the story as of now, nothing you haven't seen before, which doesn't mean that it's bad. Despite the typical tropes of reincarnation and transmigration the author does a good job to deliver an interesting story. Characters as of now are rather flat and cliché, we have the doting mother, the stern but with a soft spot grandpa etc., sure, the story is at this moment just at its start, but sometimes you wish for more indepth characters. The protagonist is smart and rutheless, yet understandable and emotional regarding his family. On the other hand, the "family loving" main character, doesn't even shed a tear or second thoughts after never seeing his "original" mother on earth again. Furthermore, he just accepts his new family and instantly feels an emotional bond. To add, I don't like an adult (highschool age) person to just simply revert back to act as an infant or small children, even if it is just for show, though that's only my personal liking. Overall, the story is entertaining and provides a good time if you are into a typical transmigration, reincarnation and op protagonist story. All the best to the author and may this novel be successful.

author should try to be more consistent

Nice beginning. Hope the following chapters will be as good as this one.

Definetly one of the better first chapter I've read on here.