knightart7081998

she almost said the thing

this story is the definition of the phrase 'wide as an ocean, deep as a puddle' the start of the story take inspiration from Shadow Slaves' but that's where similarities stop. The MC is stupid at best and the way he come out on top most of the situation is purely out of luck and plot armor typical mc almost died, and suddenly pull out a skill straight from his assholes to save his ass from being a dead ass. for me if you want a underdog mc, that mc needs to have something special like his intelligence, resourcefulness, or charisma something, anything other than luck, if you can't think of somethings then just straight up make him OP to compensate his stupidity Overall this story is not for me but still give this a chance cuz I stop reading around 30 chapters in, so maybe the story gonna get better later on

this is one of the better fantasy-harem on this website. the action mix with romance is done decently. Female characters each have their own charm, and even though, as of now there some of the heroines are not deep invested, which is understandable, considering it's only 70 chapters in the story MC can be annoying at times, but he's not dense and actually pretty self-aware of things happening around him the writing and spelling are good, though there is just one thing I dislike about this book(and many other) is that the plot armor gonna come and save the day which make the book cliche and predictable overall, it's a good story that is worth your time and coin, so give it a try. You won't regret it

plot twist it's not a duel

man if literally the plot from eminence in the shadow 🤣

wait where is the part where the ferris wheel broke out of nowhere and thing get steamy from there???? script writer need to step up

wow this is the first 3rd person confession that I ever read, I think. a little bit childish but follow Ava's character... perfection

Ava is thirsty af 🥵

if Sam was in a job interview he gonna be like 'my biggest weakness is that I'm a perfectionist' kind of person

critical thinking seems to be non-existent