DezPerado

Who cares you don’t even know him.

Why enemie? Different era, different culture.

The way the story is written is a little difficult to follow. We need more information on the background. Love the dual main character. Good over all. Maybe add small dialogs about what other characters think of jash. What ever happened to the kings suspicions?

Not bad, need a bit more work tho. 👍.

What about the emperor’s thoughts?

This chicks annoying af…

This is confusing…

Definitely one of the better chapters with no cliffhanger! Thank you!

Basically just sex. Where is the story?!

Didn’t they block these memories?