Thank you i think ive gotten better with the grammar and time skips in the later chapters. Soon im going to go back and edit the first chapters to fix those mistakes. Also I am 16

My favor part of this chapter was the fight between Yuu and Sara

I like the main characters I can’t wait to see how they grow in the story

By a class of his own I meant that NoTe was better than all other kids his age So there was no who could really compete with him even Rev who was able to keep up with him couldn’t just beat him if that makes sense

I did struggle with making the paragraphs easy to read In later chapters I made them shorter and more clear for the reader I also switched from a phone to a computer so the paragraphs might look longer depending on what your reading on

Thank you for the feedback I'll take that into account for future chapters