Jokerbud
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Awesome! I gotta say that this novel has a lot of potential! I would suggest the author to phrase his sentences and improve his grammar a bit. The Hindhu Mythology is a wide and interesting topic, I'm happy that someone is writing an entire novel based on that as even Omniscient Readers viewpoint only had a small part of Hindhu mythology. The one thing I would suggest the author is to translate the Sanskrit dialogues completely into English since most of the western readers can't understand it.
Yes, of course.