brooooo, you just KNOW i gots to try that GHUSSY

could you just timeskip the training arc, its kinda boring tbh

author, you might be following the story a little to closely, you couldve made him free merle, him merle and daryl would get along real well and it wouldve been cool to see and wouldnt affect the future story all that much

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who is the romance partner?

not even possible, the weakest angels are 2 wings and even they are stronger than freed, freed is just a slightly above average exorcist

awww batman loves his daughter

same name as the original character, i dont think anyone remebers who all the clones with the weird names are

no just use the regular names, if the clone is in the same scene as the OG then put like a (c) a\fter their name or something

you sure?, i thought that what happened in the city was just him finally stabalizing all the quirks AFO put in him

i beg you just use the normal names for the clones cos i dont remeber who is who

i forgot, did horizons quirk evolve yet, i dont think it did

i like their interactions

she calls him bruce, not batman

no synopsis, no tags, the story is rushed from the very start and mc tells them that he is an agent of order instead of saying hes quirk awakened late on his first meeting with the teachers, please learn how to write a decent story or dont write at all

story seemed like a cool idea until i realised you made stands a regular thing in the world, theres no point to him getting a reincarnation boon if you give others in the world them too, especially when his ones ability is mid at best(even if the boon was completely random), you couldve just made his stand his semblance or something without just fucking the whole power structure of rwby

please revert this change author, dont do this, just make it so that the stand is his semblance, dont put other stands in this

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