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Li dois capítulos e não consegui continuar, muito chinês para o meu gosto (não tenho nada contra chinês, tirando suas histórias e modo de viver)

I really liked this chapter. I always enjoy emotional and dramatic chapters like this. However, I felt it was slightly weaker than the previous one, probably because it didn't show Wednesday's thoughts. I think it would have been more impactful if her thoughts had been included.

The second thing that bothers me the most (the first being mental powers like telepathy, mind control, etc.) is the ability to see the future, or characters with this power. Reading this part about the elder reminded me why I hate it so much. Talking to someone who knows everything you’ve done and everything you’re going to do is incredibly irritating, unsettling, frustrating, and, above all, frightening.

Eu tinha esquecido de comentar, mas autor... Você acompanha o último herói da terra? Pensei nisso quando vi seus capítulos da entrevista (a dica é que o último herói começa com X e termina com o)

Author, I just wanted to know if it is necessary to have prior knowledge of the world in which the protagonist finds himself, an example is Game of Thrones, which unfortunately I know nothing about.

This work, so far, has been amazing (I’m on chapter 45). I admit that, in the beginning, it gave off a Chinese protagonist vibe, which made me quite worried about the direction the story might take. However, I was surprised to see that it’s actually very good and interesting. The protagonist, so far, has proven to be genuinely intelligent. His talent isn’t extraordinary, but he’s still considered talented. Furthermore, his system hasn’t shown anything overly overpowered up to this point, which is a positive aspect. I just hope it stays that way. My conclusion, based on where I am currently (chapter 45), is that this work is very good and definitely worth reading.

The story was amazing until chapter 35. I must admit the beginning (the prologue?) was a bit strange, but at least it was different. The protagonist striving to become stronger, the connections he made with other people—all of it was going really well, and I enjoyed reading it a lot. However, after chapter 35, things started falling apart. The protagonist became absurdly powerful all of a sudden. Even though the author showed he had been practicing those movements for years, there wasn’t a clear transition or mention of his increased strength during training. In the hero vs. villain battle training, for example, he didn’t seem to be at that level before. Additionally, his plan to get himself imprisoned felt completely forced. It makes no sense for someone to get arrested just to train, and being sent to Tartarus is even more nonsensical (maybe there will be an explanation later, as even the characters in the story question it, but it was poorly executed). Another issue was the author’s attempt to portray the protagonist as "intelligent." This only shows up in specific moments, like when he’s creating experiments or inventions, but we don’t see this intelligence reflected in his other thoughts or actions, which makes it feel artificial. Lastly, what bothered me the most was what the author did to Mirio. One of the best characters in MHA was reduced to just another envious and purposeless person. Mirio, of all people—one of the few truly respectable heroes. Because of all these points, I decided to drop the story. It was fun until chapter 35, but after that, the pacing and quality of the narrative completely shifted.

I confess that it bothered me what you said. The author decided to do it with Mirio in this work, he was one of the best in My Hero Academia for me... sad ☹️☹️😔

First work in which the protagonist builds a family that is really well-developed. I'm currently on chapter 22, and this work has been really well-done so far. I'm just a little worried about the future direction, considering that the protagonist will soon acquire some very strong champions, lol. It could end up losing its charm... I hope the author knows how to maintain the balance of power.

I just want to know how Assassin Screed fits into this story? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------