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I feel like this chapter is out of order too

currently chapter 39, the story is very pleasant so far, nothing that bothers you too much and the translator is doing a good job seeing that so far I haven't seen any racism or extreme Chinese patriotism like what normally happens, so it's good so far.

Well, I thought the last 2 chapters were weird, they're out of order, translator-san

I'm just not going to continue because of the videos that the protagonist sends to Tony Stark of him with Maria, that really bothers me and leaves a smell of NTR. (it's very strange to me, but the work was interesting until then)

God bless brother

Well, I really liked the dark vibe of this work, but as you said, I think my problem is with the protagonist and the dialogues in general. When I read them, everything feels very… cartoonish, I guess. The dialogues don’t sound natural; they feel forced. But as I mentioned, I really liked the overall atmosphere of the story. I just couldn’t connect with the dialogues and the protagonist.

said he wouldn't be able to surpass the power? potential of the model, but would it be able to learn, for example, the reverse technique? I think it has more to do with the person than the power of the model itself, right?

Can you tell me if it's Yuri?

I'm in chapter 5 and I wanted to continue, but first I need to make sure, the protagonist is going to be with GIRLS right? because it seems like the author is pushing him (now her) a lot towards Naruto, and I REALLY don't want to see that when the bro is a bro...

The idea is interesting, but the execution leaves much to be desired. To begin with, the relationship between the protagonist and his mother needed to be more developed. The author tried to show that his mother was strict and wanted him to be the best, probably due to something related to the protagonist's father, who left for some reason. Another problem is the fast pace, which causes a lack of details in the events. An example of this is when he awakens his quirk, and his mother says he will start training from Monday to Friday with a teacher, Cementos, a professional hero. There aren’t enough details about why Cementos, being a busy hero, would work as a private trainer. Is it for money? But he’s a hero and should theoretically earn well. In summary, these are problems that could easily be solved if the story had a slower pace to provide more details. These are my main complaints about this work, and because of that, I won’t continue following it.