the story development is good, and the characters are not shallow like most other books. Each of the character arcs are amazing, and not to mention, I really like how Ryu is kind of arrogant since it gives the feeling of a mc. Other than a few grammatical mistakes that pop up once in a while, the over all story is excellent. Also, I believe Ryu could get some kind of arc for himself that sets his character much more deeper than it is right now. PS- my personal favorite character is Jun Thank you for your hardwork, and keep it up! since i have currently read only upto ch136 i need to continue reading it. But really, your imagination, and creativity is commendable.