👉🏻Writing Quality: ✖️✖️✖️✖️⭐️1-star : MTL ✖️✖️✖️⭐️⭐️2-star : Edited MTL with many naming errors ✖️✖️⭐️⭐️⭐️3-star : Good English ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️5-star : Simple and excellent writing style, straight away 5 stars 👉🏻Story Development : ✖️✖️✖️✖️⭐️1-star : Slow pace and boring ✖️✖️✖️⭐️⭐️2-star : Slow pace but interesting ✖️✖️⭐️⭐️⭐️3-star : Steady/fast pace, have a lot of filler but interesting story ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️5-star : Steady/fast pace, do not have filler and superb story 👉🏻Character Design: ❌️If MC was nerfed once, I deduce 1-star ❌️Nerf it twice, I deduce 1 more star ❌️Stupid/Merciful/Weak MC, I deduce 1-star ❌️Giving tree/Sharing all his treasure MC, I deduce 1-star ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️5-star : None of the above 👉🏻Updating Stability: ✖️✖️✖️✖️⭐️1-star : Abandoned or Hiatus ✖️✖️✖️⭐️⭐️2-star : Less than 7 chapters per week ✖️✖️⭐️⭐️⭐️3-star : Update once per day ✖️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️4-star : Twice per day ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️5-star : Add mass release sometimes or update more than 14 chapters per week 👉🏻World Background: ⭐️1-Star to evaluate Plot Structure: Based on the story Action, Conflict, Build-up and Climax.. ⭐️1-Star to evaluate Imaginary: Based on how you visualise your novel into words or how your words make people imagine your fantasy.. ⭐️1-Star to evaluate Mystery: Mystery is good, but too many mystery make people questioning and can't understand the story.. The mysterious of the story needs to be balanced and not too much.. ⭐️1-Star to evaluate Filler/Side Story: Filler or side story is okay, but too much or too long gonna ruin the story momentum.. ⛔️Noted: As you can see, I won't give 4-star on Writing Quality, Story Development and World Background. I only give 4-star on those sections if their novel is not reaching 5-star level, BUT if the author attitude toward his reader is humble and polite kinda make me feel want to give extra point. Because "some" authors are simple-minded and arrogant where they remove all low rating reviews or pick a fight with his reader.. There are two times I straight away give the novel 5-star, not because I love the story, BUT I respect that author where his novel has received many criticisms, but he doesn't remove them. Plus, he even replies nicely to them.. I am very admired this type of mindset.. Simply amazing!! Moreover, I love to read low rating reviews because they will let us know what wrong with the story. Most "Webnovel bot" is just giving 5-star reviews without explaining anything about the novel or it is just copy-paste sentences.. And I like to give direct or straightforward reviews without mercy.. So, I apologize if someone feels offended by my words.. This is nothing personal, I guarantee you that.. It is all just my 2 cents..
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Skip this chapter and read the next chapter.. Ch107 is continuation from Ch105.. This chapter is the same chapter as Ch136.. So, even if you skipped this chapter, you can re-read it at Ch136..
Skip this chapter and read the next chapter.. Ch107 is continuation from Ch105.. This chapter is the same chapter as Ch136.. So, just ignore or skip this chapter and continue to read the story.. Sincerely, from someone who already read further
Wow, it is amazing to find someone who speaks the thing I want to say in my mind.. And yes, I totally agree with you.. Luckily, I already quit reading it.. I might be frustrated and annoyed to die if I have not stopped reading it.. Sometimes , I wonder if the story gets better and will I ever regret not continuing to follow and read this novel.. But thanks to you, now I know I make a good decision and will not regret my decision before.. Anyways, thanks for the info bro..
Nice, thanks man
I thought MC was going to fuse Golden Rinnegan to his eye.. Or at the every least, pluck them out and save it until he got the 2nd Golden Rinnegan from Momoshiki..
Honest reviews are here.. [Extremely Spoilers Alert] This is a story about MC who got transmigrated into One Piece with a system.. MC progressed at a steady pace, where the only stat exists is Constitution, Devil Power, and Haki.. Max stats here only until 100.. So, MC stats increase seem quite slow.. The gift pack MC gets is Devil fruit and unique physique.. MC got Sun-Sun Devil Fruit and Senju physique (from Naruto story, 1st Hokage clan).. Although MC has a Sennu physique, he can't use ninjutsu, wood element, or others.. He can only use this physique for the healing power.. It is due to he doesn't know how to utilise or practice chakra.. The story is quite interesting, the best One Piece parody fanmade.. MC is going to be so OP but quite late (Ch150+).. This is weak to strong genre, and MC not OP from the beginning.. So you see MC increase his stats point one by one at the times.. Moreover, MC started to learn Haki at Ch68 (too slow, in my opinion), so you kinda have to be patient.. Unlike me, I always ask in my heart, "When will MC learn Haki?" There is an Arc where MC travels to a different world, Hunter X Hunter world, Ch150+.. MC soo OP on Hunter X Hunter world.. He also learned Nen in that world.. Later, MC will also be able to summon Uchiha Madara.. Unfortunately, he didn't learn chakra from Madara.. If he learns it, he might be able to utilise his Senju physique to a higher level.. To be honest, the story is quite simple.. The system only gives MC stats points as a reward for completing any Quest.. There will be Lucky Draw, but that only happened after Ch200++.. Anyways, there are only 276 chapters, but it is quite nice.. Especially if you watch or read One Piece AND Hunter X Hunter and love to see OP character in those series.. Btw, the story is more about MC growing stronger, step by step.. There were no One Piece mysterious like about D clan, who are they, about Poneglyph, Joy boy, old Dark history, and all others unsolve mystery.. MC Sun-Sun power is also unknown by anyone, even until the end.. At first, his power only give heat power, then as the Devil Power increases, it become potent and has fire power, firebeam power, gravity power, light power, domain power, teleportation under sunlight power, and so on.. This story is about MC growing stronger and stronger and challenging many famous characters, one by one.. You also should know that MC was not Pirate but a Marine who hates World Government and his final battle is against World Government Five Elders and Imu-sama..
well, first, MC knows he is weak, so he finds some backer to support him.. second, plot armor, everyone who tries to kill MC is the same level or slightly stronger than him..
ko nothing special?
Is MC going to faint at the end of every fight??