Randall_Polliard

In this compellingly constructed universe, imaginative detailing stands out. The narrative peaks in Chapter 3, which leaves an indelible impression, demonstrating the prowess of the author's storytelling. Moreover, the author's writing has noticeably evolved, imbuing the narrative with a newfound allure that stimulates the senses, adding an engaging and tasteful layer of sensuality. ;)

Oh, man, I can't get enough of this author! Their writing and storytelling skills are seriously impressive. And yeah, sometimes the story gets a bit racy, but hey, that just adds to the excitement, you know? I mean, can you even believe it? It's the first time I've come across a story where three people get isekaied together, like bam, all at once! I'm sure it's been done before, but this one's got this awesome mix of cool and unique stuff going on. And let me tell you, it's intense!

This is a novel that masterfully intertwines themes of family dynamics, sibling rivalry, and unrequited love in a fantastical setting. The author has a knack for creating vivid, atmospheric scenes that transport the reader into the world of the characters. The story showcases a wide range of emotions and interactions between the characters, from the palpable tension between Gravis and his sons to the tender moments between Braxis and Juliane. The familial relationships are complicated, and the author does an excellent job of conveying the complexities without overwhelming the reader. The protagonist, Braxis, is an intriguing character who struggles with his own desires and the expectations of his family. This internal conflict adds depth to his character, making him relatable and compelling. His journey of self-discovery is beautifully depicted, and readers will find themselves rooting for him despite his flaws and occasional missteps. The romantic subplots in the novel provide a fascinating backdrop to the main storyline, and they are well-developed and believable. The author skillfully weaves in elements of tension and desire, making the relationships feel authentic and engaging. The fantastical elements of the story, such as the use of gravity magic, add an extra layer of intrigue and excitement. The author's world-building is exceptional, and readers will be enthralled by the richly detailed universe they've created. Retrying as a villain is a captivating read that will delight fans of fantasy and romance alike. The combination of relatable characters, a compelling storyline, and a well-crafted, imaginative world make this book a must-read for anyone seeking an immersive and engaging reading experience.

All I can say is rip fat people and league fans.

Story is cool, interesting and unique system, and a dark main chacter. What more could you ask for?

The author is a good friend of mine and puts in a lot of hard work. Give his book a chance as it has serious potential.