Dash_4life12

Unga Bunga big rock always better than fancy tech.

I like your thinking but it would most likely just make her not slippery to the touch. Because her fat and impurities all slipped away. They wouldn’t just come back.

I forgor 💀

I’m glad that you’ve decided to go straight to the meat of things since we’ve still yet to see the MC’s “full”(or more) power. But either way, keep cooking.

While I’m all for a good wish fulfillment, there comes a point where you have to get the story moving. I get that the main character is WEAK at the moment and his summons are restricted to their own respective strengths with no chance for growth, you have to get the chapters moving. At least 1000 words long with actual content beyond “choose from these three options.” I do not have enough content or story/plot to give this story a rating. While the voting aspect is cool, getting a solid foundation before asking for votes is important. Good luck with the story.

While I do like that something’s happening in these chapters, I feel that the pacing might be too slow. Not enough is happening. Not saying that the story is bad, I’m just saying that it feels as if it’s stagnant. It’s supposed to be a kingdom building-esque story. But there’s barely any kingdom building or relationship with Nero. I get it, you can cook. But maybe turn up the heat a little more yeah? I see promise in this story. That’s why I’m saying all this. Thanks for the chapter.

Soup.

Keep going. Keep the world building going and you’ll see that you have a solid foundation! Dont forget the small details with Kingdom building.

He likes The Climb.