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Jeremy_Stone_1106

Jeremy_Stone_1106

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2023-03-12 เข้าร่วมแล้วGlobal
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  • Jeremy_Stone_1106
    Jeremy_Stone_11062mth
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    This fanfic is great at first but started to turn into a pile of pig's excrement and the mc is just another Chinese type breeder.... Put a warning if he is going to fuck the bitch ( the dog lady).... And the whole " I have a computer in my mind 🤮🤮 " is just another name of I have a system.... Overall If you compare this to the wind calamity by devil hex, it's like comparing dog's shit to a 24k golds.

    Road to Rogue Ninja
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · UlTiMaTeNiNjA
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    Can he stop acting so creepy towards Ginny... She is 10... What is he a pedophile?. And he is way too overpowered.. and what is this wand created by nature bullshit... Overall the mc is an annoying pedophile overpowered idiot..

    Otherworldly Interference
    หนังสือและวรรณกรรม · Alsiel_A
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    Great Great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great,.......

    Naruto: Legacy of Lava, Ice and Storm
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Pikachu234
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    Bitch.,. I think you should stop writing.... because this is the worst trash I have ever read, like wtf is wrong with you writing this effin nonsense.....

    หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว
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    This mf would probably collect " sisters" and then fxck them... this trash ff will turn into a harem trash..............................................

    Fairy Tail: Collapsing Stars
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · nyawdao3
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  • Jeremy_Stone_1106
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    This trash will soon turn into romance trash.................................................................................................,..................

    Naruto: Sakura Blizzard (TL)
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · DrunkenStar
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  • Jeremy_Stone_1106
    Jeremy_Stone_110610mth
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    Great fanfic I love the idea of limiting the MC powers, and the length of the chapter is sufficient and also great translation... I hope you wouldn't dropped this..

    Konoha: Unable to learn ninjutsu, so I had to develop my own.
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · TypeMercury
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  • Jeremy_Stone_1106
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    This fanfic is probably written by AI. Because the story is so short and from the vocabularies and sentence structure it is very clear that the author used chat GPT

    The Reincarnated Shinobi of the Grand Line
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Chicken_Mugget
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  • Jeremy_Stone_1106
    Jeremy_Stone_11061yr
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    The author is destroying his own novel by this forced ino romance non sense. This is why the rating is significantly dropped. It's not too late to fix this problems.

    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Hkj
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  • Jeremy_Stone_1106
    Jeremy_Stone_11061yr
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    I guess I am heterophobic?... And why are you so pressed about it?... You fucking breeder...!

    Goddess of Ice: Corrupting Bleach
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Maerry
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    The romance is really forced, it became very cringe I mean ino? Please🤣 ..... This is why the ratings dropped,, I think you should consider love interest......

    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Hkj
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    Jeremy_Stone_11061yr
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    I love the Yuri in this fanfic but.. God! ... The heterosexual part in this fanfic ( I'm talking about Naruto) is disturbing and I skipped that part.

    Goddess of Ice: Corrupting Bleach
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Maerry
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  • Jeremy_Stone_1106
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    First mistake, nobody in konoha is actually named Tobias.. Naruto world is a Japanese themed universe so by using western names, you are ruining the nuances and the vibes of Naruto.

    Ways of Survival in Naruto
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Rnibm123
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    People who recommended harem I have a few questions? Are you a virgin? Who has never talked to a woman besides your mother? Or are you simply delusional? If yes please get out of your mother's basement and get laid.

    Marvel-ous Ninjutsu
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Pewpewcachoo
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    This is one of the best fanfiction that I have ever read. The gamer element is just written perfectly. And the MC may seem OP but he is actually not which is great.

    The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · MonkWithAPen
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  • Jeremy_Stone_1106
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    Oh great. Another self insert mc who wants to fuck with Hinata. How "creative". Also the pronouns is sometimes her his, it's really confusing.

    Naruto: Administrator
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Auther_Uchiha
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    Jeremy_Stone_11061yr
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    Author, if you don't like the fujoshi or yaoi, you did not have to mention them in your writings. You just need to focused on that borderline pedo romance that you actually like.

    Naruto: The Fool in Konoha
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Stalkah
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