Writing
of reading
32
Read books
I get that you're angry, im not going to sugare coat it and say this was a good desition from my part but what I do know is that you could stick around and give me constructive feedback so i can produce better stories for you to read in the future. How does that sound mate?
Now that i read back on my writing, it does kind of sound cringy.Though i hope you still enjoyed vealor showing deamon who the boss is
Yue and ignis are his first and seond hand, basically his generals
I will, all of the fanfictions i've started will be picked up at some point in time. but because i have my hands full with this one and the twilight fanfiction, thrones of storms and vikings are going to have to wait.
Thanks, I appreciate it, same to you
....Thanks i guess, still learning so if you could tell me exactly what made it rubbish, i can work on it in the future
Thats pretty accurate, you're really good at this you know, maybe take a crack at your own fic, i would read it.
Thanks and same to you
i realy apreciate this, thank you
thanks man i apreciate the feedback, and I hope you enjoy the coming chapters as well