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The character had so much potential, but he doesn't look or act at all like someone from the time he lives in. He just looks like a dumb guy born in the United States. The characters around him are only old in age! because they don't act like adults, and the author tries to make them seem like adults in the most idiotic way possible, using phrases like "DON'T MESS WITH ME OR MAKE ME LOOK LIKE AN IDIOT, OR I'LL MAKE YOU SUFFER THE CONSEQUENCES." That's just idiot to the extreme. The MC simply gives away all his technology to anyone, to the point that if he passed by a beggar, he World Just give away a steam engine to The beggar because yes. The world isn't as bad as the rest because he's "following" the original story, because I'm sure it would be much worse! Lastly and most importantly, the author pretends to accept criticism, this is the worst for me, so many grammatical errors that he doesn't correct or he simply ignores that nobody likes CIELA and, believe it or not, if she disappeared it would literally make no difference to the story and would even be better, I'll take the first 40 chapters for example, remove all the intercessions that involve CIELA and you'll see that there is no difference and it's even better, do you know how i am so sure? I SKIPPED EVERYTHING and I thought the initial story was really better without her. It's funny how a single character can turn something so good into something so bad. CIELA was a mistake from begins to The end.

Hello author! I saw in the comments of a few chapters ago that you said that you make shorter chapters to post more, as it is better than posting 1 large chapter on the site. Do you have any other tips on how to post correctly on the site? Another serious question is if you know what your average word count per chapter is or what would be the best amount of words to post per chapter.

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Even taking that into account, 1970 was after the first industrial revolution in Brazil, which is when São Paulo started to be known the way it is.

i used the edo pro emulator and the bot stops attacking, i may have written it in a different way and got confused, i will revise. thanks for commenting!