Logain_Septimus

Very good story line and background that's been built the translation/writing needs some work, grammar and whatnot specifically. But otherwise it's a good Powered MC. Worth reading.

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This is painful to read.

It's rushed but the grammar is ok. Probably got bombarded by stones and tried to keep pace by rushing the plot. I don't personally recommend this fic as it feels 'off' to read to state simply. Quantity sacrificing quality.

My only complaint is the lack of thought of other stats. 40 stat investment alone makes you superhuman. At 99 strength he'd struggle to not crush standard weapons in his grip. Had he invested in other stats some that'd make more sense... Just an observation. But I understand the goal was to gain 'soul strength' and all that.

Decent writing grammar wise the rest leaves a lot to desire.

MC feels awkward and annoying. Some of the characters are roughly the same. Interactions feel unnatural. The writing needs work but it's ok. The story background is a 'great' idea but so far 20 chaps in feels off. I personally don't like this. But someone else will.

A lot of cuck jokes and not references but otherwise a decent read nothing great but above the other slop on this site. Read for fun not for seriousness.

Meilei not millie

Very nearly perfect. The writing characters and others are in line and feel nice. Fine articulated and describes things in a nice light. Slight comedy that isn't forced or annoying.