Yusuf_Sumba

who's lucas?

she has even more character than the supposed female lead. hope author makes Atticus just move on at this point since their relationship didn't even go that deep yet.

the mc just became a pushover somewhere along the way but hope that changes.and the romance 😔 it's like trying to copy sunny and neph romance but end up making it atrocious, unbearable even.at this point the only thing that can save the romance is either a new fl or just make it a harem instead.at this point even jeci can be a better option than raven.i beg you author anyone else but raven🙏🏾.his character seems like it will improve hopefully now that hes'saway from raven.romance is the only issue with the book now,all other areas are seeing improvements even if minute,still better than at the start.

and also plz don't drop this story🙏🏾

honestly at the start i had low expectations with the naive mc but as it goes on i can't help but be impressed with the character growth he has.the novel has great world building and an easy to understand power system, i don't even get how this book isn't popular yet.still at chapter 80 but can't wait to see how the mc grows.the side characters are also well written giviingthe book more life.thanks author for making it a free read even though it would have been worth every money spent on it.just hope that as it goes on the mc loses more of his sense of justice.

great story from author everything is great except for the mc lacking in braincells sometimes.still a good story but would be even better if the mc has character development.

is this book dropped? ...................... ...........

exactly ,i think the romance in this novel is just atrocious, that's the only negative thing i can say about for me. author is either terrible at writing romance or has their own twisted views on relationships,coz at the start the characters weren't even getting close to each other,just straight to sex after meeting.

it would have been a masterpiece without the romance in the story.for some reason this kind of novels usually either have terrible romance or it's just barely bearable.whether harem or single fl, the authors just never make it work.and i feel like most authors think harem is a must in their novels for them to have substance,but it isn't unless you're writing smut.this novel had terrible romance due to author not letting characters even get attached just sex after first meetups.either he's really terrible at writing romance or he never cared about the romance part of the story.and if he never cared why bother writing the romance anyway?just to ruin your already good book?

read the official mtl and the story is surprisingly good till around chapter 200 where it gets ruined due to the relationships.the mc just goes after almost all the women he knows and has no standards.it becomes less about personal growth and more about just simping after the slovers trust fund is introduced.had great potential but author became greedy with the females and ruined it,even dating gold diggers while knowing they after his money.just a simp with no principles at this point.im dropping it after all that.though you can still read till the 200s to make your own decisions whether to drop.but it becomes trash.