Biyze

Oh no nothing bad, I said that in like a joking way like when you call your friend stupid for playful reasons. She was acting a little childish so I said that in a funny way it. Me like mc mucho

She’s stupid

Good so far just nothing like it and very unique. No faults in the writing or grammer and has a nice storyline so far. Keep up the good work!

Good, story is good everything is good and if you like cold strong smart mcs give a read and hopefully is good enough to stand the passage of more chapters… since the others didn’t even make it past 20 *cough* keep up the work

Okay I haven’t read much, but the grammer is very hard to understand and most sentences don’t seem to connect well. From up to chapter 2 and the limited knowledge I have due to the grammer it looks good. But I do hope that if the grammer improves I’ll come back!

Well at some point gods have got to be mentioned, says the title, so atm I’m confused in how an academy relates to much

Interesting so gods can die which means that others can take their place? Or do they come back since wine for example will be alive forever the goddess should technically come back that would be the most logical thing but it seems that they can die and that means other humans could ascend into godhood to take their places

I just can’t he knows all this stuff from his past life but I don’t think is using it efficiently at all. The author is trying to make him smart but I don’t think he really is he knew that they would find them in the vertical farm and could have done something to stop them but didn’t and I feel that it will be the same thing were he knows something and instead takes a longer route to solve the problem when it’s already there. The background up to whatever chapter I’m at is in shambles and doesn’t correlate well. I also feel that the writing will be continuous something will happen in a chapter where it seems like nobody was prepared for like and invasion but next chapter low and behold the mc knew about it… like really? It is making me mad reading this and will be dropping. Not saying it’s bad maybe for first time readers but I need more.

She is sooooo restarted there is no way a person can be this old and act like a child, especially in a world like this. Don’t know if reading is still worth but if the character doesn’t develop or drop this naivety then I’m done

Good so far interesting concept. Hope it wasn’t dropped but might be.