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wdym if u don't like romance u should just go read some other novels ok don't tell author how to write his own novel
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just perfect man I can't remember the last time I cried reading a novel , bro or sis you are freaking good the way u convey emotions is topnotch oh and u almost broke my heart with regards to Maria, don't do that again,it's not good to play with our feelings Hahaha anyway good bless you for bringing this colour to my life
author why do u ppl like making mc dumb..its not funny at all just pathetic
disgusting simp..he's ruining the story
yo why is he disturb the girl, it makes me uncomfortable, it feels like she doesn't like him at all but he keeps simping for her
lol what's the point of pointing out how she was fucked by other men author could have just just avoided mentioning it smh..now its ruined for me bye
so true dissapointment
the writing is good no doubt about that, but I feel like the author is a masochist cuz if not why make the mc one. it's totally unappealing and it makes what was supplied to make the story warm and fluffy feel redundant . an example is when the mc was tortured and slapped and drugged by his wife and almost died at her hand, but guess what the fucker does when she sees her tears " aww my wife is so cute , I wish she wouldn't torture me again..anyway I love u honey " what a fucking douchebag...beta ..absolute disgrace to men . I'm so mad at both the author and mc..quick question to the author.. are you a female?...if not then I hope you are doing OK wherever you are cuz if this how you'd react if you face a situation like this then may God be with you
at this point you might as well lock it cus I'm just skimming through give me good action not some edgy kid