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HeavensMistake2

HeavensMistake2

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a growing digital artist, an idealist and a big fan of anime, HeavensMistake

2022-12-12 เข้าร่วมแล้วGlobal
0.5h

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  • HeavensMistake2
    HeavensMistake29mth
    ตอบกลับถึง AbdulfatahFatima

    U Can add a vote also

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    HeavensMistake29mth
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    I am not much of a romance or love related novel ready buh this novel is an attention drawer, it drew me in, I believe captivated me is the right word Well done author, and the grammar usage is very above average

    Redemption's Trial
    วัยรุ่น · AbdulfatahFatima
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  • HeavensMistake2
    HeavensMistake29mth
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    The novel is a very cool novel having a very cool atmosphere, the vocabularies are really really great and I like how the author uses them, the timing is just there Good job!!!!! Although I feel the chapters are longer than expected and the story is lacking a prologue buh still a very nice work

    The Making Of A Man
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  • HeavensMistake2
    HeavensMistake29mth
    ตอบกลับถึง Rugged_King

    hahaha! he is working on it

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    HeavensMistake29mth
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    yoooo, this is my first time reading a LGBT novel, buh damn from the title to the writing style to the contents, damn this novel is sick!THIS IS A HIGHLY RECOMMEND NOVEL FOR THE GENRE LGBT !!!

    The Omega Princess's Choice
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    HeavensMistake29mth
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    the storyline is going somewhere and that's really nice buh i feel the author needs to work on his grammar especially in terms of past and present, asides that it is a very attracting novel u hv made

    The Seven Hells
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  • HeavensMistake2
    HeavensMistake29mth
    ตอบกลับถึง Pixxie_Mysteria999

    you welcome, and btw it's really nice to meet you, asides being a co author i am also an artist can u please review my art works https://www.deviantart.com/siyan05

    The Tale of Mysteria
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    HeavensMistake29mth
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    the storyline is very nice and the use of first person view was really good and very unique and intriguing novel definitely a highly recommended novel

    The Tale of Mysteria
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  • HeavensMistake2
    HeavensMistake29mth
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    hello author this is a great piece I loved and enjoyed it so much, right from the name down to the story very entrapping.although shouldn't ur story have a prologue I think it is missing only that buh still the novel is dope expecting more author!

    Demon Knight Zuzu
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  • HeavensMistake2
    HeavensMistake29mth
    ตอบกลับถึง UelUel

    i believe it's gonna turn out well and i definitely cant wait also

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  • HeavensMistake2
    HeavensMistake29mth
    ตอบกลับถึง Vex_900

    i told ya you wont be disappointed, thanks

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  • HeavensMistake2
    HeavensMistake29mth
    ตอบกลับถึง The_Open_Sky

    well said!

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    HeavensMistake29mth
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    the story is nice especially the first pov thingy

    Ch 1 Issue #1-Prologue: Death & Reincarnation
    The Tale of Mysteria
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    HeavensMistake29mth
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    okay i see sth nice going on here, i would say u work on the vocabularies, otherwise this i hv no issues with the story

    Ch 3 Chapter 1
    Adventures Of The Fateweaver (DXD and more)
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    HeavensMistake29mth
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    the fight is really nice, gives off the feel like we re in the novel watching the fight😅

    Ch 3 First Encounter.
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    HeavensMistake29mth
    ตอบกลับถึง HeavensMistake

    like pronouncing letter A

    Aei, ever observant, couldn't ignore the growing tension in the air. His senses keenly attuned to the environment, he could feel the tremors beneath his feet, each one reverberating through his bones. The approaching threat, though unseen, was palpable, a dark cloud hanging over their already dire situation.
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    HeavensMistake29mth
    ตอบกลับถึง Han_Sirang

    it's a process, judging from the earlier chapters it is found that they novice rank 0 sorcerers so with time the strength aspect of them increases.

    If the occupants of the bus-like vehicle were ordinary individuals, the accident would undeniably have claimed all the passengers' lives. About three unfortunate people near the point of collision perished, and several less unfortunate souls endured severe injuries. With the bus now overturned, its inhabitants found themselves suspended in their seats, while those less fortunate crashed into the newly transformed floor, including the Escort Sorcerer who, due to his delayed seat belt fastening, suffered additional injuries.
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  • HeavensMistake2
    HeavensMistake29mth
    ตอบกลับถึง HaremKing777

    EXACTLY!!!!

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  • HeavensMistake2
    HeavensMistake29mth
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    honestly, truth to be said this novel deserves more than a five star! i personally love the plot settings the vocabularies and the whole aura which the novel giving out. 3 chapters in two days, best part is there all sick!. i have only issues tho, i just feel u should try to balance the length of each chapters bcos they seem longer than each other. yh i guess that's all for now. i hope to see more though!! #HEAVENS MISTAKE

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    HeavensMistake29mth
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    yo, the story plot is absolute we would love to see moreee!!!!!!!

    Ch 1 Aei.
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