I'm giving this three stars for the character design, especially the main character. but honestly, I got bored the main character should move away from Jiuhon.

More chapters, please. I have got a hunch Yeli, the main character is hiding his true abilities. Can wait to see how powerful and strong he is.

Impressive! I have added this to the library and I'll read it till the end. However, I think you should work on your English to make it almost perfect. I can rate your English 7 out of 10.