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Tama_Kun

Tama_Kun

Lv3

New Novelist

2022-12-11 เข้าร่วมแล้วIndonesia
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การเขียน

13.4h

ของการอ่าน

250

อ่านหนังสือ

ป้าย

6

โมเมนต์

183
  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun6mth
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    Ethan.... I think all author in WN run out of name for male MC. almost every novel I opened, and I find Ethan 😂

    Ethan Bunnies stood on his balcony, his eyes fixed on the distant horizon, disbelief etched on his face. Confusion clouded his mind, his heart heavy with the weight of unfamiliarity. Where was he? How had he come to be in this world? These questions echoed within him, unanswered and elusive.
    Rise of Power: Journey of Kingdoms
    แฟนตาซี · Warrior_Blade
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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun6mth
    แปะแล้ว

    For me this story is so good, the description , plot, mc and etc

    Remote Village to Strongest Nation
    แฟนตาซี · Meowder
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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun7mth
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    I see that your skill already improve bro, but I suggest you to improve your skill for making dialogue

    Book Have Been Moved!
    แฟนตาซี · Jammy_Dragon
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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun7mth
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    people dislike if you make the dialogue like that, don't ever use : but just use "ABC"Samuel claps shania's shoulder and greets him "Hey bro" then he continue "Wanna take a lunch together"Shania looks at Samuel's smiles and it make his heart beating so fast "s-sure" he replied.

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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun7mth
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    too long for one paragraph, make one paragraph consist only 3-5 sentances

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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun8mth
    ตอบกลับถึง Dale_Ostrander4

    thanks for your comment, I hope you enjoy the story

    On my way to the adventure guild, I met my childhood friend, Zelta. She lived near my house and had the same fate as me; we had both lost our parents. Zelta had long, straight, silver hair, silver eyes, white skin, and a slim body. She was beautiful to me, and I wanted to protect her smile.
    The World that I Wish
    แฟนตาซี · Tama_Kun
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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun8mth
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    good concept . I do love the way you make Phoenix as the concept

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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun8mth
    ตอบกลับถึง DaoistZoid

    well, Al himself only love zelta, but he don't have enough braveness to confess. In other side, Zelta always give him a signal that she love Al, but Al never realized it. What will happen in the future? will Al realize that Zelta loves him? Let's enjoy the story

    Ch 2 My Adventurer Test
    The World that I Wish
    แฟนตาซี · Tama_Kun
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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun8mth
    ตอบกลับถึง DaoistZoid

    Thank you for reading. I do understand that the early chapter is not enough good because I still newbie in that time. I hope you can still enjoy the story.

    Ch 3 A Promise to Keep Memories of Family and the Will to Move Forward
    The World that I Wish
    แฟนตาซี · Tama_Kun
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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun8mth
    ตอบกลับถึง GEEGEE

    Thank you for reading

    Ch 3 A Promise to Keep Memories of Family and the Will to Move Forward
    The World that I Wish
    แฟนตาซี · Tama_Kun
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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun8mth
    ตอบกลับถึง DaoistZoid

    Thank you for reading my story. if you ask why she did that maybe. in real life merely pitiful man who failed in love affair. So, I want make the heroin love the MC first rather than MC love her first

    Ch 2 My Adventurer Test
    The World that I Wish
    แฟนตาซี · Tama_Kun
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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun8mth
    ตอบกลับถึง DaoistZoid

    thanks for remind me. I see that I Made a mistake. since the early chapter I still learning to make a novel.

    "Firstly, there are rank systems in the Adventure Guild," the receptionist continued. "The lowest ranks are Chopper, Silver, Gold, Diamond, Onyx, and Ruby. You can only take quests that are suitable for your rank.
    The World that I Wish
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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun8mth
    ตอบกลับถึง AZPRETTY

    thank you for your review, I will ask my friend to fix it later.

    The World that I Wish
    แฟนตาซี · Tama_Kun
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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun8mth
    แปะแล้ว

    I think for cultivation story, this is enough good. so I recommended to other reader to enjoy this story

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    Tama_Kun8mth
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    if you use cultivation then commonly they are Chinese, then what the heck with MC named Celestine? it's heard like western name

    Sacrificing Mortality for Mr. Right
    ย้อนยุค · AZPRETTY
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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun8mth
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    I wonder why the Protagonis named Celestine while they take place in China. I mean it's look un match

    Ch 1 Prologue
    Sacrificing Mortality for Mr. Right
    ย้อนยุค · AZPRETTY
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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun8mth
    ตอบกลับถึง De_Prodigy

    thank you so much

    The World that I Wish
    แฟนตาซี · Tama_Kun
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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun8mth
    แปะแล้ว

    the story is good, enjoyable, interesting. Your Grammar enough good. Good Work

    Cursed With Immortality
    แฟนตาซี · De_Prodigy
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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun9mth
    ตอบกลับถึง NewbieJimjim

    Yes, it start from 1st of Sep. Thanks for asking

    Ch 91 Prince Allium's Battle Speech
    The World that I Wish
    แฟนตาซี · Tama_Kun
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  • Tama_Kun
    Tama_Kun9mth
    แปะแล้ว

    The writing skill is good. after reading the first chapter "damn, it's good. I love your story"

    Rebirth of the Ruined Noble
    แฟนตาซี · Emberlight
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