Interesting to read the complete chapter 😍 .... The chapter makes us to feel the characters real . It was narrated in a wonderfully way . Waiting for the next chapter and keep writing.

I liked the way it's narrated and thoughtful... Continue writing and waiting for the next chapter ❤️

you continue to fulfill the needs of a reader .... continue with your great job ....keep writing and always inspire others ☺️

I find the chapter was interesting to read ... It was very well narrated and waiting for the next chapter ☺️

It was great reading the novel .The title itself was unique ... Hope u continue with this creative writing 🙂