did you seriously gave a rajput english name!!!!

first of all the writing quality is good and the flow of the story is to my liking. usually i don't like too much paced story as it might lose base so yeah that's a plus too as the time has given for story development. so overall it is a good novel to read.

If you want to go on journey to fantasy world this is the perfect book for that. the first chap is what makes you hooked to the story, it's written wonderfully and the start will drive one crazy by the twists and turns. So try it and you'll love it!!

I will fix the grammar mistakes and will work on the POV,thanks for review

Thanks, i am still new to writing but will make sure that quality gets better!!

SO as far i see the story has good potential. if you are a scifi fan you should give it a try. as for charaacter desingn its good so far, a little more could be added though. there are some gramatical mistakes, so you should take care of that. Keep the good work.

A child should help.....

It's a secret for now!! :)

I am a fan of OP MC so I like seeing this, As for the story, its very good so far, and the writing quality is also good. In some places, some paras are a little stretched but other than that it's best. First time seeing FL so far liked it. if you are a fan of female Lead then you'll love the story!!!

The story starts with a bang and seeing that makes you hyped. I like how you used the POV to describe the story of the book. There are some typos in places, if you make them up the story is fabulous.

I will give more focus on that, thanks for the review...

a newbie writer here, I like Op MC vey much.i will speak the truth now, i simply touched the book i saw in the screen for exp, but in the first chap i saw some good part so gonna read the book now...

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the story line is good and th world building is fantastic so i like the book very much. The writing is done fabulously so full stars for that. as for character design i like to see MC a little at the start so four Comment - Don't read anymore review and just dig in the book, you'll love it.

well I like the name but he is not same😂