yes, also if you noticed 'Matsumoto' translates to pine treeI wanted to go with plant based terms for the females

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it's already serializing, please check it out 🙏

The story has a dark and mature setting, though it's not my cup of tea I really find it interesting especially since I'm working on a novel with a similar concept (Greek setting, Gods, demigods and such)Have me sold two chapters in

already joined

just started

the story starts off with a great intro and settingjust wanna say, keep it up

Just finished chapter one... man the mc went through a lot 😭great introduction, dialogue and narrative

It's actually good so far (two chapters) could use improvement on the grammar but I like where this is going as a regression story

it's not bad on the first chapter, grammar could use an improvement along with more dialogues.

This is actually pretty funnyI see great potential for the story itself

The plot isn't actually bad, I see the author put a lot of thought into this and a Naruto reincarnation with system doesn't sound like a bad mixBut the grammar needs improvement

For me it was just too fast paced, but it's actually good

Okay thanks so much for taking your time to read this, I really appreciate it and I want to do my best as a novice author so please support me

This is alright, I can tell you put thought into this while coming up with this and the story is okay. but you could extend the story to raise the stakes and make readers engaged.

This is really good, Masaka seems like an interesting character so I hope to hear more from him, though it could use an improvement in terms of grammar