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This novel has its ups and downs regarding a few things but overall, for me personally, it is a fantastic story. It is up there with my all time favourites. The author has done a great job considering this his first work. You can see the growth in the author as a writer as the story progresses which is shown through the growth in the MC's character. I really love this novel and am looking forward to the author's other future works. Regardless of other reviews, as a reader who read from start to end, this story is an amazing piece of work and I am a big fan. Thank You Author!

A fantastic novel and I am saying this after reading a lot of cultivation type stories. The translation work done is amazing, there is no issues with the reading. A very very good job done. Please upload faster, cannot wait to read more. This has become one of my favourite novels.

This is a really good naruto fanfic and I am sating this after reading many many fanfics. There is a grammar issue upto the 18-19th chapter which needs to be re-edited. But starting with the 20th chapter, there are no issues and can be read easily. I really good fanfic, don't give up on it easily. Please finish this story!

Let me correct myself, the grammar issues are there only till the 20 chapters. Starting from the 20th chapter everything is fine.

If I am to be honest, the grammar issue is only for the first 20-30 chapters. Thats the main issue since its in the start and very easy for people to give up reading. As the story progressed the grammar was normal and there were no issues. This story is a really good fanfic and I would suggest continuing it with changes and editing for the starting chapters. This is a genuine suggestion as I have read countless fanfics and this one is really good.

Why is it not updating anymore? Are you dropping it?

Please start updating again soon, spent so many coins on this novel, would be enraged if this novel is not completed.

A fantastic fanfic, a one of a kind on this platform or anywhwere else. A great job done on the translation as well. A must read for any sports fan. P.S. For people with no patience like me who cannot wait for more chapters, patreon is a good place.

Sorry just checked, in the collection page the chapters are missing but on the home page they are available. My bad.

See, I am thinking of subscribing on your patreon but the only reason stopping me is that among the recent chapters on patreon, you have skipped chapter 92 and chapter 94. Please fix all that.