a good idea. I only have one problem the paragraph are to full, so it's hard to focus. I advise to to shortening it like instead of making it the for the same amount of word's

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what is the name there?

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fire mwn keep up the good work............

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what is the egele name?????

buggy will notice the haki

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pls don't drop this the start is very good

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I think he needs to understand they are farming the humans

why does he needs that

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pls go back to upteateing................

pls update ...............................

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2 years before harry potter start school

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