VeraMera
Trying to write again. Please leave a comment on my works so i can improve and make it better. Thank you!
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A fantastic read thus far! The plot is intriguing, and the flow of the story is simple to understand and follow. The reader's engagement in the world won't be affected by a few minor grammar mistakes. Did I also add how well the author created the world in this book? You could have been there because of the way they depicted the scene and the action. Good job and I'm adding this to my collection! Keep up the good work <3
The storyline so far is great. I like that you didn't sugarcoat any of the harshnesses of the mafia - it adds to the realness and reading experience. It's not all lovey-dovey romance, it's a real-life drama which I like and I don't see often here. The flow of the story is great and it leaves you wanting more. Keep up the good work!
A great read all around. I kinda like that the chapters are long, it makes me feel like I'm reading a real paperback book, and it's easy to get lost in your world-building and storyline. The way you write the emotions that the characters are feeling is superb, you try to express it in words so that the readers can feel it too. Added to my collection! A great read indeed :)
Great story so far! The plot is easy to follow and keeps you wanting to read it until there are no more chapters. What's cool about it is it's based loosely on Indian mythology, which is rare here in webnovel. I hope you will release more chapters, author since I'm dying to know what happens next! GREAT WORK! AUTHOR!
Great story flow and pacing! The characters are easy to imagine and root for. Keep up the good work! I enjoyed it so far and I'm looking forward to new chapters from you :)