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G009ps

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2022-10-12 เข้าร่วมแล้วUnited States
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  • G009ps
    G009ps2d
    ตอบกลับถึง Darkleaf14

    Thanks for joining me on the ride, mate. Appreciate it.

    Ch 69 Chapter 69 - The Price of Pride - Part 1
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    ตอบกลับถึง Darkleaf14

    Had two option Ainz or Misumi Makoto. Went with Ainz for now. Right now I am giving him a major power upgrade, giving him an entire realm. I like the story of the slime but, his character isn’t something I can stomach much. I mean I would’ve have come on, his loyal followers died at the hands of the humans. I get he slaughtered the army in revenge and revived the ones he lost but, that incident still happened! Ainz and Masiumi would show them despair. Rimuru still persists peace with humans. Politics is one thing but, Rimuru’s mentality is too naive.

    Ch 69 Chapter 69 - The Price of Pride - Part 1
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    ตอบกลับถึง Darkleaf14

    It’s actually Red<The Presence<Blue That’s why Blue would break Prensence’s realm/universe in mins. Even Red is taxing the realm but, he can maintain it for a while.

    Ch 69 Chapter 69 - The Price of Pride - Part 1
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    ตอบกลับถึง M_OB

    Great speculations. But, Wanda will just be his wife in the future not Master. Master is an OP anime character. I’m considering his reality as a higher realm. Clues are everywhere.

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    ตอบกลับถึง DaoistGrandFate

    A support AI modeled after his mother was sent along with his ship

    Just then, a familiar voice rang through the pod, calming his racing heart. "Calm down, Master!" the voice advised. It was a voice he recognized all too well - the voice of his mother.
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    ตอบกลับถึง Psan

    The pod trajectory was not being controlled by the system at this point. So, isn’t it obvious that the system would try to alert the occupant to brace for impact?

    "ALERT: Passenger is advised to brace for impact!" The system continued, its voice echoing ominously in the small space of the pod.
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    ตอบกลับถึง Psan

    ??? Firstly, it’s my own writing. It’s as I imagined it. The MC didn’t see a point to respond to Hal so, after getting ignore more than once, Hal reacted by creating a construct and forcefully gather his attention. What’s wrong with that?

    "You have only yourself to blame for ignoring me!" shouted Hal, his voice filled with frustration and a hint of anger. With a swift gesture, he sent the giant green fist flying towards the alien, hoping this time, he would get a reaction.
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    ตอบกลับถึง G009ps

    Also, think about the how his mother was pulled away to deal with the ever changing situation of the war. Sage prepped him also, in a hurry.

    As the alien ascended higher, stepping into the moonlight, his features became more distinct. His armor was worn-out, his clothes torn and stained with blood, evidence of a recent battle. The blood suggested that he could be injured, implying that he was a warrior who had recently been in a fierce battle.
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    ตอบกลับถึง Psan

    Kindly read the paragraph again. The clothes were stained not that he was bleeding. He was healed during his journey.

    As the alien ascended higher, stepping into the moonlight, his features became more distinct. His armor was worn-out, his clothes torn and stained with blood, evidence of a recent battle. The blood suggested that he could be injured, implying that he was a warrior who had recently been in a fierce battle.
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    ตอบกลับถึง Psan

    Read the tags. This is a story with cultivation elements. Not a pure DB story. Depending on the relam the power levels can mean you are the boss or can mean you are still weak. Also, each transformation is broken down into levels. Like for example there is a difference between the Blue state of MC and his Mother. The start of the story is on a higher relam where the priomordial laws are strong. So a star destroye’s singularity cannon doesn’t create a normal singularity. Also, read the thoughts section. Anyway, it’s my first writing, maybe not able to portray my imagination well but, I’m enjoying the ride. Only interested in getting suggestions here for plots. Thanks for your time.

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    ตอบกลับถึง Psan

    Oh this was by an ai tool I used. For Images I’m using an AI image generator.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: The Prayer -Part 1 (Updated)
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    ตอบกลับถึง DaoistGrandFate

    It's not. Just personal preference. Only using AI for spelling and grammar checks. Changed the writing style after Chapter 39. If you can't carry on till then, please go find another book.

    The sound was so intense, so all-encompassing, that it drowned out the cacophony of the battlefield below, if only for a fleeting moment. The clamour of clashing weapons, the screams of the wounded, and the battle cries of the defiant were all momentarily silenced, replaced by the awe-inspiring, terrifying sound of interstellar power.
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    ตอบกลับถึง Psan

    That’s gonna happen. But, what I’m against is introducing a wild card in the harem.

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    ตอบกลับถึง Psan

    Wonder Woman, *Spoiler*, Scarlet Witch. One of the readers guessed scarlet witch otherwise wanted to keep the other two quite till the reveal.

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    ตอบกลับถึง DaoistfDJ8Ue

    That is what I was going for. I dislike fast paced stories. However, since webnovel is a place for fast paced stories chapter 39 onwards i changed my writing style and made it fast paced. Hope that will satisfy readers like you.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6 - The Arrival- Part 1
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    ตอบกลับถึง Midnight_Gravity

    This story has cultivation elements. Depending on the realm the laws are either strong or weak it wont allow a saiyan of that level to destroy a world.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5- The Prayer - Part 5
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    ตอบกลับถึง Chill_House_

    sure. thanks appreciate the suggestions. @g009ps is my handle.

    While team beta was defending Themyscira, another Kryptonian ship made its way towards the north Atlantic ocean and not observing anything but the vast ocean began running localized scans of the area to investigate the sources of the discrepancy.
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    ตอบกลับถึง M_OB

    Check chapter 54 again . While reading my versions noticed that I actually skipped a few paragraphs. Let me know your thoughts

    Ch 44 Chapter 44 - The Odyssey - Part 11
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    ตอบกลับถึง Chill_House_

    Check chapter 54 again . While reading my versions noticed that I actually skipped a few paragraphs. Let me know your thoughts

    While team beta was defending Themyscira, another Kryptonian ship made its way towards the north Atlantic ocean and not observing anything but the vast ocean began running localized scans of the area to investigate the sources of the discrepancy.
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    ตอบกลับถึง rbp

    MC? How is he open? Till now I’ve only shown Orach give basic advice and courtesy. I mean he is living in Wayne Mansion so, some ounce of respect should be shown to Bruce and Alfred. Also, he definitely cautious since he asks the AI to clean out any bugs and has his own plans. Please let me know your thought. Love to improve.

    Ch 36 Chapter 36 - The Odyssey - Part 3
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