andema_ambika

I’m left speechless after reading the novel, it a level of trash i never knew a would get to read again😅 the whole world is comprised of stupid people, and the mc keep getting away with stupid decisions, not to mention creating inventions in a matter of days ( even if he had all the blueprints)

This story is too stupid😅 the level of stupidity is staggering, the story is too fast paced, the characters are too stupid, the worldbuiding does not make any sense I’m thinking that maybe the author is brain dead

Indeed, that is very stupid in my opinion, the story is moving way too fast and who is he to just set up working hours out of the blue😅 as if we where in modern day let alone telling that to maids , a work that most of the time require you to be available 24/24, let alone he is jus 5 years old, who listen to a child that age I’m starting to think that this story is written by AI😅

I find the story s bit messy and the author want to give too much details that weren’t needed, it’s like he is making the plot as the story continues

The story is inconsistant and has too many plot armors, and the MC adopted daughter is very stupid, you would think that she is very intelligent because of her previous life, but no, she keep causing problems all the time and getting her dad into situations that would otherwise not have been as dangerous or complicated, she keep antagonizing and killing humans for very stupid reasons that make absolutely no sense. Same for all the characters, they jump to conclusions too easily, then make stupid decisions all the time, most of the plots could have been avoided if they used even a little bit of thinking

So much wasted potential… The story was great at the start but the author keep adding too much details, the relationships, the cultivation gets messy and wanting the mc to always get some kind of opportunities at every turn that it gets tiring very quickly.

Great story but to much fillers and unnecessary words, it’s starts to get tiring

the power class makes no sense, why bother to make a complex power classification if no characters respects it? the author keep saying how some peoples are immensely powerfull, just for their accomplishments to be overtaken by someone who is like 2 or 3 ranks bellow them