Author_of_Fate

Yes, other slaves were punished in that me place. The blood just layers

Thanks!

blood stains turn brown after a period of time

haha, that's an expression similar to "face went pale," not a reference to an injury

yeah, something like that

Nah, he hasn't closed one before. I believe there was a conversation with the Pope where they said demon gates had already appeared, and that was an inconsistency, as you pointed out. I went back and changed it.

Nah, I don't mind at all. I've spent a lot of time writing this and don't always have the patience to catch every little mistake. I really appreciate it when someone points out any errors and try to fix them right away. Thanks!

Haha you might be right. I'll take a look at it in a bit. Thanks!

Thank you for the kind words! I hope you keep reading and enjoy the story!

I'll take a look at it. Thanks!